Your hands reach to my heart
You are demanding more
Your fingers lace through my lungs
Taking my breath and binding my core
The words you whisper
Are fire in my veins
Seduction’s malice
Bringing pleasure with its pains
My body is defenseless
Against this tepid embrace
Your melancholy does so easily
my vibrancy replace
Deeper you delve
Into my frigid soul
Myself no longer
My essence you now control
Though I’m drowning
My lungs welcome you in
My beating heart
Giving over to your inviting sin
Your teeth sink swiftly
My skin so easy to break
The venom injected
Ah but that was your mistake
Though you are the creator
And I but the child
Seduction’s fury now courses in me
And it’s driving me wild
The master has fallen
Downed like a tree
Resistance is futile
When the one in control becomes me.
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Love this! Personally and please don’t shoot me down too harshly, I think it breaks into three independent harder hitting poems very nicely indeed.
I would not shoot you down. I could see this in multiples as well. I just liked it this way. I will keep that in mind though when I design and format my poetry book. As always, thank you for your amazing and kind words and fabulous feedback. Have a marvelous day and never fear repercussions for your honest opinion. I value you it more than I can articulate.
I love the poem and thank you so much for taking my comment in the spirit it was made – that’s much appreciated. Stay Safe.